The Hidden Art of Writing

March 16th, 2007 | Blogging | Syndicate Content

Several months ago I was in Barnes & Noble when this this little hardback book caught my eye. The Little Red Writing Book: 20 powerful principles of structure, style and readability. I keep it in my office near my desk and whenever I have a little free time I’ll crack it open and read another chapter. Here are a few tips and quotes from the book that you can apply to your writing - both on and off your blog.

In the introduction author, Brandon Royal, tells us that his book is based on a simple but powerful observation: “Students and young professionals who develop outstanding writing skills do so primarily by mastering a limited number of the most important related writing principles, which they use over and over.”

I have only implemented a handful of the 20 principles given in the book, yet have noticed an increase in the quality of content on my site. I also feel more confident of my posts knowing that they don’t sound like random journal rants any longer.

Write with a Top-Down Approach

An airline pilot never leaves the runway without having a destination and flight pattern.

This should be done in your first paragraph. Your readers should read those first few sentences and know what the rest of the post is about. A principle that Paul integrates superbly on his blog.

When your purpose is to explain or inform, don’t play “I’ve got a secret.” Your first paragraph should be like a movie trailer. Give them the plot and the story-line, but make them want watch until the credits roll.

Sentence Variety

“Most sentences should follow the subject-verb-object sequence because it produces the most power. However, if all sentences follow this order, it creates choppiness and monotony in your writing. Particularly noticeable are series of sentences all begining the same way, especially with “I” or “we.”

Here are a few suggestions of how to start a sentance:

  1. With a Subject: I, we, he, they, it…
  2. With a Phrase: A phrase is a group of words that does not contain a verb.
  3. With a Verb: a verb is a word that expresses an action or a state of being
  4. With Adjectives: An adjective is a word used to modify or describe a noun or pronoun.

A few more quotes from the book:

“Writing is similar to selling in that it is part science and part art. The words and approach vary with each situation.”

“Writing has four pillars - structure, style, readability, and grammar - and each pillar is like the single leg of a sturdy chair.”

What are some rules or tips you try following when writing?

7 Comments »

  1. Yuri said:

    Thanks for the pointer, i’ll need to pick that one up. Have you ever read the Elements of Style? It is also superb.

    Posted on March 16, 2007 at 8:11 am

  2. Ryan Couch said:

    Thanks for this!

    I’ll have to pick it up - I think I saw it listed on 43folders.com once or something.

    blessings man - keep WMD drumming for Jesus

    Posted on March 16, 2007 at 1:57 pm

  3. Anna said:

    Hey Shawn. I have the Elements of Style Yuri’s talking about if you wanna check it out.

    Posted on March 16, 2007 at 3:55 pm

  4. {Shawn} said:

    @ Anna: Sweet. I’ll put it on my to-do list.

    Posted on March 16, 2007 at 5:15 pm

  5. Molly Mosack said:

    This is music to my ears. As an English major with a deeply imbedded passion for words and all they can or won’t imply due to attention, creativity or slop, I adore that you are highlighting this. Hear, hear!

    Posted on March 16, 2007 at 9:51 pm

  6. Becca Levie said:

    Great article. I like your artistic flair.

    Posted on March 17, 2007 at 12:53 pm

  7. Joan Williamson said:

    You might need a proofreader. You have “sentence” spelled wrong. Let me know if you need any more assistance. JW

    Posted on May 29, 2007 at 8:00 pm

Dem's fightin' words...